A LOOK INTO THE MIND OF THOSE WITH MENTAL ILLNESS | Creepypasta | “Embedded” (TWO VERSIONS!!!)


NARRATOR:
I couldn’t decide which version I liked better, so since this creepypasta was on the very
short side, have a couple versions and tell me which one you liked best. “EMBEDDED”
(picture from Sadofreedomist on the Creepypasta Wiki, and story read from the Creepypasta
Wiki) (Version 1#) There is no need to use lights. The darkness presses all around you, runs
through you, toys with your mind and ensnares your sense. But it is unable to do much to you. This mere darkness. However, it wouldn’t take a real horror hiding
within it to cause panic. The thing you really fear is your mind. The dark shape in to corner is merely a denser
shadow. However, to the active and fearful brain,
it is a vicious murderer, crouching, ready to pounce. Or else a ghost, ready to leap out and shriek
to the high heavens. But it is none of these things. It is simply emptiness. That’s where I am now. In the darkness. I don’t know where I am. I could be in a vast desert, or a forest,
or atop a high mountain. But none of these things matter, for truly
I am in prison. The most complex, intricately fortified prison,
so labyrinthine that it holds no need for alarms or guards. Who needs walls and weapons to hold men, who
are already trapped in their own heads? (Version 2#) There is no need to use lights. The darkness presses all around you, runs
through you, toys with your mind and ensnares your sense. But it is unable to do much to you. This mere darkness. However, it wouldn’t take a real horror hiding
within it to cause panic. The thing you really fear is your mind. The dark shape in to corner is merely a denser
shadow. However, to the active and fearful brain,
it is a vicious murderer, crouching, ready to pounce. Or else a ghost, ready to leap out and shriek
to the high heavens. But it is none of these things. It is simply emptiness. That’s where I am now. In the darkness. I don’t know where I am. I could be in a vast desert, or a forest,
or atop a high mountain. But none of these things matter, for truly
I am in prison. The most complex, intricately fortified prison,
so labyrinthine that it holds no need for alarms or guards. Who needs walls and weapons to hold men, who
are already trapped in their own heads?

One thought on “A LOOK INTO THE MIND OF THOSE WITH MENTAL ILLNESS | Creepypasta | “Embedded” (TWO VERSIONS!!!)

  1. First version is more muted, meant to come across as depressive. Second version is more along the lines of madness to the points of hysterics.
    For those listening with actual mental illness, I hope your lives get better, those who need treatment get it, and that you don't ever have to get to the point like the person in this story feels (or ever again, if you feel you've been there). Have a wonderful day.

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